Nabil0192's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Witness The Rage]

yep..

just cuz 0-bombers suck.

Tx-Maniac-xT responds:

Indeed. Now that's what i'm talkin' bout. I've been victim to man 0 bombers, but who hasn't right. Thanks.

[Silent Tears [Orch]]

Its too beautiful.

Wow.
Definately felt that one...
Good work!

Dj-Flux responds:

Glad you liked it.

[This World (Retribution Beat)]

pretty fcken legit

Nothing else to say... you guys definitely say enough with this beautiful piece
Not perfect, but pretty damn good
5/5 10/10

HeLLsGaUrDiAn responds:

Thanks a lot man, not perfect but then again what song really is? lol but hey I'm just glad that you listened and enjoyed it. Stay up man.

[Cool Rush]

Good start... but...

I feel like it could flow better. The beat gets good by 1:00, but the shrillness makes me want to shut it off before 30 seconds. Bring that down an octave or two. Also the robotic sounds are interesting, but I don't know if they fit with the sound you establish in the beginning. Also, your samples are way too loud in comparison to your drums. Either that or they are just so shrill and jarring that it seems that way. In general, none of your samples match or sound remotely well with eachother. In time you will get an ear for what sounds well together and what doesn't.

It's very repetitive also. Even just a slight variation once in awhile would be very welcome. Unfortunately because of how shrill it is, its hard to give detailed advice on how to improve your melody, but I think I know what sound you were going for with this and the sample you chose is close, but definitely not it.

Nice start, I'd like to see a refined version. :D

Quednau responds:

thanks for the advice. it seems like I know what I want but I just cant find the way to get it right, and i hear that im very repetitive in my other songs 2. I will try to make my songs better according to your advice and maybe ill just remake my old ones that got bad ratings. Once again thanks alot for the tips :]

[Fresh (Preview)]

damn son

impressive!

you definately have your own flavor to this kinda thing

dj-protege responds:

Thnx man, just doin what i gotta do

[Pissing in the wind]

really good

the beginning takes away from it,

everything else was awesome

allnaturalskintags responds:

Thank you Nabll0192, your kind comment has warmed my gullet.

[(WF1) Shaolin Temple 1.5]

Calming... may induce nostalgia!

a beautiful piece! It is truly incredible.

I have to agree though... something is missing although I cannot quite place it.. after all this isn't quite my area of expertise...

I'm sure you'll find it though!

5/5 and a 10/10

wyldfyre1 responds:

heh i know what its missing i just gotta get around to adding it LOL. its not consistant in some places and needs more instruments hehe i'll fix that though trust me. Thanks for the review!

[(Andiron) Don't Know How]

Tasteful

You have a good grip on pretty much everything in most areas (all you gotta do is practice and play around for interesting sounds)

I think the area you are having trouble with is with percussion and tempo. Actually, this song is much better in that area than your other songs, but what it comes down to is less is more. This is expecially true in electronica. When you add extraneous stuff, it is INCREDIBLY distracting to the ear. Try going as simple as you can, and then building it up ONLY in areas that improve your song. (Remember, it may sound cool, but that doesn't mean it fits with the rest of the song/tempo choice.)

So yea, you get
5/5 and 8/10 for the review

KBen responds:

I am great full for your input and will use your advice, thanks!

[Corrupt Streets]

Right..

Soundz like Immortal Technique, actualy

Your lyrics are good, but something is off... I dunno, I would check it out though if I were you.. it really messes up the song..

Overall good job,

OBIEakaAO responds:

dear sir,
the thing that would be off would be me. i am off beat. my arrangement wasnt the greatest, and the mic quality is a 3 out of 10. Thats what's wrong. This is an olddd song. Thanks for your review.

[Dj-T lluminated Pathway]

Mmmm...

Well, the title doesn't match the song, in my opinion. Illuminated Pathway sounds more ambient than this song was. Also, compared to everything else in the genre, it didn't really stick out and above anything else.

With that said, it was made with plenty of skill and potential... I advise you to make sure this is the right genre for you. Personally, I think you have too much creativity, but if this is what you love, don't worry about experimenting. Just look for ways to shine.

Great sounds, however I kept expecting an amazing climax, and that was never delivered. Overall, it was very catchy. I advise throwing in something interesting with your drums though. That's just personal taste though.

Anyways, good job, and keep working on everything... you'll go far. :D

Prodigal responds:

ooo long review. Ur right about the name. I cant think of anything else to name it though. I love to make techno songs ( you might wanna listen to my other ones) and i think this is my best one so far. As i said in my Authors Comment's, i cant edit or change this song around. i have been thinking of a way to do so with my other songs with Demo samples.