damn son
impressive!
you definately have your own flavor to this kinda thing
damn son
impressive!
you definately have your own flavor to this kinda thing
Thnx man, just doin what i gotta do
beautiful
personally i think this one should be r&b cuz it would sound much better sung
really good
the beginning takes away from it,
everything else was awesome
Thank you Nabll0192, your kind comment has warmed my gullet.
haha
hey it really does sound like timbaland!
good work gurl, i like ur shit, its actually interesting
Calming... may induce nostalgia!
a beautiful piece! It is truly incredible.
I have to agree though... something is missing although I cannot quite place it.. after all this isn't quite my area of expertise...
I'm sure you'll find it though!
5/5 and a 10/10
heh i know what its missing i just gotta get around to adding it LOL. its not consistant in some places and needs more instruments hehe i'll fix that though trust me. Thanks for the review!
Very well done
This is not my area of expertise, partially because this is your learning experience and i would say it fits comfortably into the experimental genre. You have nice funky sounds, and you have some nice... well, more electronic sound, but I'm not sure if they go together the best which is why you get the 9 instead of 10. They are balanced, but not quite complimenting in a way that creates a nice laid back funky song. That saw was just out and out way too abrasive...
My compliments on the percussion though.. it was very well done for the most part! Good job.
5/5 9/10
Powerful and beautiful... simply poetry.
K, this is gonna sound weird, but I got an intense "beauty and the beast" vibe (the one from the old disney movie). Just one of the parts which was repeated several times sounded just like part of one of the songs...
Besides that weird feeling, everything was beautiful and multidimensional. It truly transcended the ears. Close your eyes, you can smell and taste this song.. it has so much character and texture that it is necessary to download.
As it deserves; 5/5, 10/10, and downloaded.
Tasteful
You have a good grip on pretty much everything in most areas (all you gotta do is practice and play around for interesting sounds)
I think the area you are having trouble with is with percussion and tempo. Actually, this song is much better in that area than your other songs, but what it comes down to is less is more. This is expecially true in electronica. When you add extraneous stuff, it is INCREDIBLY distracting to the ear. Try going as simple as you can, and then building it up ONLY in areas that improve your song. (Remember, it may sound cool, but that doesn't mean it fits with the rest of the song/tempo choice.)
So yea, you get
5/5 and 8/10 for the review
I am great full for your input and will use your advice, thanks!
Right..
Soundz like Immortal Technique, actualy
Your lyrics are good, but something is off... I dunno, I would check it out though if I were you.. it really messes up the song..
Overall good job,
dear sir,
the thing that would be off would be me. i am off beat. my arrangement wasnt the greatest, and the mic quality is a 3 out of 10. Thats what's wrong. This is an olddd song. Thanks for your review.
Hellz YEA!
gotta luv dem chinese freakz.
10/10 , is sum quality stuff rite here
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